Kara's story

Today was a fairly easy day in school.  Thank goodness because Kara decided writing a story was going to take 45 minutes.  Wow!  She needs work on capitalization and punctuation, but her spelling is decent (for a six year old) and her typing is pretty good.  She impressed me with throwing some vocabulary words in there - she knows how to suck up to her teacher.  Anyway, enjoy her story.  :-)

the next month,Dixie is a mother! with four pups,Mellohi,Lightning,Colorchanger,And Alexea Lightning can place lightning and shoot birsts of thunder! Mellohi can make any tipe of music play Colorchanger can change the colors of enythng,Alexea can Teliport. They like to go in the woods and adventure,Dixie lets the go by there self they protect eachother,Lightning sets the foe on fire,Mellohi plays scary music,Alexea teliports behind them and holds on,then teliports away then teliports back,Colorchanger makes the forest look super scary and when Alexea teliports back,she only brings herself back they once found a monarch catipillar,so they fed it leaves,and the catipillar climbed on Alexeas huge wings and then they flew back home for more bones from there steak they had for dinner,after bones,they go to bed with loads of leaves next to the caipillar,when they woke up,the cattipillar was in a crysalas,hanging on the coat hanger (fur coat) then they went out to find another,the found a bear,a dog eater bear,Alexea teliported it away once it was on fire,Mellohi axedently left on the scary music,so Lightning askd her to play softer music (the scary music is DUN DUN DUN DUN DUN DANDA DUNDADADA) and they had bear for lunch (the bones) when they came home,there dad Cash was home,and aunt Veneca they had fresh "dog food" on the counter (home is in the den next to the back yard of mine) then Dixie called uncle Oreo,Oreo brot Jennifer and Agatha,then Dixie called the last one,Sparcle,loads of the dog food was gone,all he dogs (Dixie and Cash) sugn one of the old memorised songs Mellohi plays the music,Lightning played the loud drums (lightning) Lightnin got a old dead tree,only one tree, and Colorchanger made the walls (dirt) colorful,red orenge green blue purple pink and light browm (tan) and last of all Alexea teliported like crazy,across the dog stage,into the forest,in the sky,all over the place,untill the found a wild beast,the ne and only animal they hated so much,it was the CAT all the dogs went barcking and growling while the cat went hissing and they all want nuts,Dixie howld to call me,i claimd the cat and Dixie askd me if i could teach her not to enter the den i sayd of course ill keep her in the house call me if she sneeks off into the den i named the cat shivers the cat had beautiful blue eyes,Dixie did to so i ident say enything,while Shivers sharpend her claws,i went to go chech on Dixie and Cash Cash was all mudie and Mellohi lost her wing,Dixie has only 3 legs,i was like "what happend!?" all Dixie did was wimper Cash only leyed there and luckly Cash was breething then i saw a bear and lightning lost a lightning bult power (meaning she can only toss a bult once a second) and Alexea coldent teliport so far away,i saw a huge bear,i used my magic to open my wings and then i wersled he bear,i won! Shivers hissed at the dead bear and scrached it up,Colorchanger coldent turen enything into blue,but everything else she cold do and she also was just leying doin the same thing as Cash,breething but just leying there and i carryed Dixie int the house and when i came back ann there was was a huge Shivers Shivers ATE the bear! my jaw hanged open i fainted leaving Dixie on her three paws and now when i woke up i carryed dixie back to the house.And i also Took Cash about an hour later,Cash woke up i hugger him Dixie was also feeling better so i hugged both of them then i caryed Cash into the "Cash claimed bed" whle Dixie stood there on her three legs after a wile,they bot cold walk there selfes,not that well and they sure cal fly! etlyst they are feeling better!

Comments

Elisabeth said…
Now that is a story!! She has way better spelling than Hannah. And I can hardly get Hannah to write a complete sentence when she is supposed to write a story. I think she did a greater job. I love her name choices. So creative!
jeday0323 said…
Thank you, Elisabeth! She is so creative, for sure, but she will only write like that if she can type quickly. If I put her in front of paper and ask her to write, she won't/can't. Maybe that's Hannah's preference too?

My favorite is the scary music she put in there. ;-)